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Ezblast
Posted on Saturday, June 18, 2011 - 01:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Old Friend

The last bolt tightened, I wipe off some dirt with my shirt.

I mumble to myself, “I don’t ride you enough, not at all.”

Eleven years by my side, and today we shall night ride!

My leathers creak as I pull them on, all in black, I’m back.

Gloves pulled, helmet cinched, petcock turned, key as well.

Every scratch I know, every fix I have done, a button pushed.

She roars to life, her black soul purrs contentedly – an evil sound.

Click, we are off, she glides smooth and sleek, totally unique.

Sculpted by time, a mind, and evil intent – she flies easily.

More elemental than machine, she dances each corner effortlessly.

They said she would never dance, would never fly, could never be.

They were wrong, she grew with me, we race the wind and play.

Her lights bright, the test a success, my heart quiets with her song.

I wonder how long she will live, even perfection does not last.

Pulling in, a smile on my face, I mumble, “Damn, that was fun!”

In that moment I am glad old friend, and you are beautiful.

Motorcycles are made for the moment, in the end that’s all we have.









EZ
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Dynasport
Posted on Saturday, June 18, 2011 - 01:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Nicely done.
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86129squids
Posted on Saturday, June 18, 2011 - 01:46 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Doesn't suck too bad.

Your prose grows, methinks, as I scratch my old melon in wonderment and appreciation.
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Whisperstealth
Posted on Saturday, June 18, 2011 - 02:42 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Great! I liked it : )
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Firebolt020283
Posted on Saturday, June 18, 2011 - 02:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Very cool
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Fahren
Posted on Saturday, June 18, 2011 - 08:45 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Ode to Vader. Catches the moment.
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Ezblast
Posted on Saturday, June 18, 2011 - 12:53 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Perhaps, but I stumped the class with the word petcock - lol - in advanced English Lit no less.
EZ
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Britchri10
Posted on Saturday, June 18, 2011 - 02:35 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

What would an advanced Eng Lit class know about keeping domestic chickens?
Chris C
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Ezblast
Posted on Saturday, June 18, 2011 - 09:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

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86129squids
Posted on Sunday, June 19, 2011 - 12:36 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Easy EZ- this here is a family friendly board, watch what you say...

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Ezblast
Posted on Sunday, June 19, 2011 - 01:45 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Here's the latest - left them speechless - lol - the second class assignment - write about love from a different perspective:

Love - Death Awaits


His chin brushes her shoulder; nose scenting her hair, his lips whisper so softly – a dare.

Sweetly she smiles, her arms echoing his embrace; in trance they quicken their pace.

Rocking life’s cradle, they loose and find each other, each breath truly a last taste.

She shudders, so spent, and sighs, his eye’s squeeze shut, his lips hurling a harsh cry.

A hand on his shoulder pulls him aside, two rush forward, life’s champions denied.

Wet cheeks, a bloody shirt, car and tree – hammer and anvil – lives not meant to be.

He howls - pain’s animal, rain and flashing lights, too much, too lost, nothing is right.

Rocking still, a metronome of grief, his knees touch ground, death a heartless thief.




At least it wasn't sappy - lol
EZ
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Imonabuss
Posted on Sunday, June 19, 2011 - 11:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

I'm impressed.
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Fahren
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 08:30 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Careful on spelling in an advanced English class: did you mean "lose" rather than "loose?"
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Ezblast
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 03:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Yeah - good catch! Spell check doesn't catch everything, and I do want to maintain my rather wild gpa of 4.0 - I haven't the faintest how I've pulled that off so far, and I always list it as 3.5 on my resume - Thank you!
EZ

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86129squids
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 03:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Fun thread!

EZ- dam strait spell cheque won't catch it awl- you best put a harry eyeball on it yourself pry her to submitting to the Brainiac...

All throughout my schooling I always excelled in grammar, spelling, syntax, et cetera.

I like to go play trivia games at bars, and work at finding screen names that the censor list can't catch- then WINNING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ezblast
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 04:22 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

That could be fun with license plates as well - lol
EZ
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Brumbear
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 05:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

The janitors scrub brush scrubs in vain.
The shythouse poet STRIKES AGAIN.
As I read these words of wit.
I am happy to have a shyt
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Ezblast
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 05:53 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

LOL - thank you for sharing!
EZ
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Mtjm2
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 06:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Nicely done EZ ! But whats up with that seat .
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Ezblast
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 07:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

LOL - just being different! - its a Buell thing.
EZ
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Mtjm2
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 07:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Sorry to disagree , but that is not a Buell thing .
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Ezblast
Posted on Monday, June 20, 2011 - 07:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Really -
Who's said said - "Different in every sense!" - lol
Its a Corbin at half price - can't beat that, and it separates it from the rest of the pack. Not a big fan of white myself, but I figured I'd rock it for a while, and when and if it gets dingy dye it black - I have two and a half bottles standing by for that day, but right now its usually getting attention in a positive way, so I haven't bothered with it. Heck - it took a good number of hours just modifying it to fit better, done after the picture - lol - you know I've been messing with Blasts for a long time - switching it up, keeps it fresh and fun - that's the idea - right?
EZ
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Ezblast
Posted on Tuesday, June 21, 2011 - 12:54 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

This is what the test ride was about - some in city and country riding to really test out the new fairings lighting system and the upgraded bulbs I put in - damn thing is brighter than my CRs!












Now that's some terrific ultra light weight bright lighting!
EZ
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Ezblast
Posted on Friday, July 01, 2011 - 12:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

Assignment 4 - one to go! - lol


The Apache Way


I will not know you, see you, touch you

You are her’s in blood , I am but the father

I walk a contrary path, I am medicine to mine

A stalker, I seek to heal, to make whole again

Alone, my quest demands many guises used

To hunt the parts of spirits not mine and return

Always to return what is theirs to them

Attention on one point, in worlds un-thought

Guides offer wisdom, I know too too much

Eagle feather touching, so high I fly, sun in eye

Yet as Apache fathers before, my son I know not


EZ
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Ezblast
Posted on Friday, July 22, 2011 - 01:15 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

The Final - lol

Original:



Old Friend

The last bolt tightened, I wipe off some dirt with my shirt.

I mumble to myself, “I don’t ride you enough, not at all.”

Eleven years by my side, and today we shall night ride!

My leathers creak as I pull them on, all in black, I’m back.

Gloves pulled, helmet cinched, petcock turned, key as well.

Every scratch I know, every fix I have done, a button pushed.

She roars to life, her black soul purrs contentedly – an evil sound.

Click, we are off, she glides smooth and sleek, totally unique.

Sculpted by time, a mind, and evil intent – she flies easily.

More elemental than machine, she dances each corner effortlessly.

They said she would never dance, would never fly, could never be.

They were wrong, she grew with me, we race the wind and play.

Her lights bright, the test a success, my heart quiets with her song.

I wonder how long she will live, even perfection does not last.

Pulling in, a smile on my face, I mumble, “Damn, that was fun!”

In that moment I am glad old friend, and you are beautiful.

Motorcycles are made for the moment, in the end that’s all we have.

EZ







Revised:




Old Friend



The last bolt tightened, I wipe off some dirt with my shirt.

I mumble to myself, “I don’t ride you enough, no - not at all.”

Eleven years by my side, and today we shall night ride!

My leathers creak as I pull them on, all in black, so worn.

Gloves pulled, helmet cinched, petcock turned, key as well.

Every scratch I know, every fix I’ve done, a button finally pushed.

She roars to life, her black soul purrs contentedly – an eerie sound.

Click, we are off, black, fast, smooth and sleek, so totally unique.

Sculpted by time, a mind, parts, and my evil intent – she flies easily.

More elemental than machine, she dances each corner effortlessly.

They said she would never dance, would never fly, could never be.

They were wrong; she grew with me, tonight the canyons rock.

Her lights bright, the test a success, my heart soars with her song.

I wonder how long she will live; even such perfection does not last.

Pulling in, a smile on my face, I mumble, “Damn, that was fun!”

In that moment I am glad old friend; and you are beautiful.

Motorcycles are for the moment, in the end that’s all we have.

EZ


Original:




A Picture


Crackly, crispy yellows and oranges surround her

Reaching tree limbs for falling golden treasures

Wild fall breezes - stirring and cooling – abound

A fluttering checkerboard anchored by bare knees

Picnic basket - a treasure chest, un-sampled;

A young girl, sitting, tasting more than food

Nature’s scents make each sampling a new delight

Book forgotten, seeing the clouds and sun overhead

Caught by natures beauty – a glorious swirling palate

Leaves alive fly around her straw bonnet, distressed

Uncaring, a smile, a gentle soft happy line lost in time

For she alone knows this now, this gift that is life.



EZ



Revised:




A Picture


Crackly, crispy yellows and oranges surround her

Reaching tree limbs for falling golden treasures

Wild fall breezes - stirring and cooling – abound

A fluttering checkerboard anchored by bare knees

Picnic basket - a treasure chest, un-sampled;

A young girl, sitting, tasting more than food

Nature’s scents make each sampling a new delight

Book forgotten, seeing the clouds and sun overhead

Caught by natures beauty – a glorious swirling palate

Leaves alive fly around her straw bonnet, distressed

Uncaring, a smile, a gentle soft happy line lost in time

In this picture she alone knows this now, this gift.



EZ


Original:




The Apache Way


I will not know you, see you, touch you

You are her’s in blood , I am but the father

I walk a contrary path, I am medicine to mine

A stalker, I seek to heal, to make whole again

Alone, my quest demands many guises used

To hunt the parts of spirits not mine and return

Always to return what is theirs to them

Attention on one point, in worlds un-thought

Guides offer wisdom, I know too too much

Eagle feather touching, so high I fly, sun in eye

Yet as Apache fathers before, my son I know not

EZ



Revised:



The Apache Way - Choice & Tradition




I will not know you, see you, touch you - choice

You are her’s in blood , I am but the father - tradition

I walk a contrary path, I am medicine to mine - tradition

A stalker, I seek to heal, to make whole again - tradition

Alone, my quest demands many guises used - tradition

To hunt the parts of spirits not mine and return - tradition

Always to return that of their souls to them - tradition

Attention on one point, in spirit worlds un-thought - tradition

Guides offering wisdom, I know too too much - tradition

Eagle feather touching, so high my spirit flies, sun in eye - tradition

Yet as Apache fathers before, my son I know not - choice

EZ




Love


His chin brushes her shoulder; nose scenting her hair, his lips whisper so softly – a dare.

Sweetly she smiles, her arms echoing his embrace; in trance they quicken their pace.

Rocking life’s cradle, they lose and find each other, each breath truly a last taste.

She shudders, so spent, and sighs, his eye’s squeeze shut, his lips hurling a harsh cry.

A hand on his shoulder pulls him aside, two rush forward, life’s champions denied.

Wet cheeks, a bloody shirt, car and tree – hammer and anvil – lives not meant to be.

He howls - pain’s animal, rain and flashing lights, too much, too lost, nothing is right.

Rocking still, a metronome of grief, his knees touch ground, death a heartless thief.

EZ





Revised:



In Love


His chin brushes her shoulder; scenting her hair, his lips whisper softly a moan.

Sweetly she smiles, arms echoing his embrace; as in trance they quicken their pace.

Rocking like life’s cradle, tightly he holds her, sharing each breath - truly a last taste.

She shudders, so spent, and sighs; his eye’s squeeze shut, his lips hurling a harsh cry.

A hand on his shoulder pulls him aside – she falls, uniformed champions of life denied.

Wet cheeks, a bloody shirt, broken car and tree – hammer and anvil – lives never to be.

He howls - pain’s animal, rain and flashing lights, too much, too lost, nothing is right.

Rocking still, a metronome of grief, his knees on cold ground, death a heartless thief.

EZ


The poetry got an A, my critiques of others poetry got a B - so the 4.0 got busted, though I got an A in Business - lol
EZ
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Swampy
Posted on Tuesday, July 26, 2011 - 07:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post    Move Post (Custodian/Admin Only) Ban Poster IP (Custodian/Admin only)

"His chin brushes her shoulder; nose scenting her hair, his lips whisper so softly – a dare."

EZ, you are giving away my secrets, I read that and though "OH, NO~!"

I had to stand on my tip toes to kiss her on the back of the neck.....

Not you Maggie....LOL
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